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07-04-2009, 10:32 AM


Kris: Hello. My name is Kris, legendary male fashion model and icon, and I'm here to find Beautiful's Next Top Model. I searched all over the continental U.S., and have found 13 gorgeous girls to compete in the competition. Each week, they will be given a photoshoot, which will determine who stays and who goes. Only one girl will walk away with a $250,000 contract with Elite Model Management, a $50,000 contract with Maybelline, and a spread in Elle Magazine. Let's meet the 13 lucky girls competing in Beautiful's Next Top Model.

BIOGRAPHY:Anna-Sophia lives for fashion. Currently a student at Maryland Fashion Institute, Anna-Sophia loves creating and wearing her own designs. In fact, everything she will be seen wearing on the show is her own creation. Anna calls herself a "fashion encyclopedia", stating that she knows everything there is to know about the fashion industry. We'll see if that's true when cycle one begins.

BIOGRAPHY:Ashley describes herself as "a modelesque redneck", boasting her ability to burp the entire alphabet, as well as deliver a fierce photograph. Ashley will admit that she would much rather be outside riding her dirt bike than flipping through a Vogue magazine, but says that no one wants this more than her. Growing up without a mother, Ashley missed out on mother-daughter things such as Painting Nails or Braiding Hair, so this is her chance to learn how to be a girl.

BIOGRAPHY:If you look up rebel in the dictionary, you'll see a fierce photo of Brandi. As a teenager, Brandi stayed in trouble at school. Getting caught smoking in the bathroom and skipping class were an everyday thing for her. At 16, she dropped out of school and moved in with her boyfriend. Unfortunately, Brandi was the subject of constant physical and mental abuse, and even tried to take her own life twice. Finally, Brandi got up the courage to leave her abusive partner and start a new life. Brandi states that she has a lot to learn about modeling, but is willing to stay up day and night to increase her knowledge, and show everyone that no matter what has happened to you in the past, it's never too late for a better future.

BIOGRAPHY:Carly has always thought of herself as an ugly duckling, and up until recently, no one could even begin to convince her otherwise. Growing up, Carly was considered the "weird kid" at school, and only had a couple of friends. Carly's hobbies include playing the guitar, drawing, and watching slasher movies, but says that modeling has always been one of her interests. "I always wanted to be a model, I just thought I was too f***ing ugly for it" says Carly.

LOCATION:Rhode Island
BIOGRAPHY:Christine admits to being a snob, and says that's the way she'll always be. Christine says she can already tell that she and a few of the cast members are going to clash, because they're the epitome of white trash, which she hates. She loves shopping, but won't be caught dead at a shopping mall, because she only prefers the best of the best. Christine is convinced that she's ready for the status Supermodel, but what will the judges think?

BIOGRAPHY:Kim loves life, and tries to spread her love to everyone she meets. She always has a smile on her face, and is seldom in a bad mood. Modeling has always been one of her biggest passions, but first and foremost, Kim loves giving back. When she was 16, she started an organization titled "Little Siblings", where teenagers travel to a children's hospital once a week to spend time with the kids. Kim insists that no matter what happens, she's still going to be her happy go lucky self, and not let anyone get to her. We'll see if that's true when the competition begins.

BIOGRAPHY:If Lila could change one thing about herself, she says that she would like to have grown up in the 60's. A self-procalaimed "flower child", Lila is a huge supporter of the green movement, and says her favorite day of the year is Earth Day. Lila loves modeling, and says that she would be up for anything, even nude modeling. "I think as long as it's done tastefully, and not gratuitous, it's like a beautiful work of art" says Lila. Can this nature loving beauty handle the heat of the competition?

BIOGRAPHY:Lorainne's posture should never be a problem in the competition, as her mother, an ettiquette teacher, has made sure of over the years. Lorainne says that her mother has instilled manners into her since the day she was born. "I wasn't allowed to slouch at the dinner table, I had to butter my bread one slice at a time, and I was definitely not allowed to slouch when walking" says Lorainne. "I remember having to walk across the room multiple times with a book on my head, so I don't think bad posture will ever be brought up in my critique". While Lorainne's etiquette may not be a problem, will her limited experience be a cause for concern?

LOCATION:Florida(originally from Iran)
BIOGRAPHY:Milan migrated to the U.S. with her family when she was 10 years old. Moving to Florida was a huge change for her, but that's where Milan first discovered her passion for modeling. Milan was fascinated with such supermodels as Naomi Campbell and Linda Evangelista, and would constantly try to immitate their posing and runway walks. Her only disappointment about the industry was the lack of exotic looking models, but she plans to change that by winning the competition. However, Milan must learn to bring her own style to the industry, because immitation will get her nowhere.

BIOGRAPHY:Miranda says that the one word everyone uses to describe her is "cute". While she says it's nice to be called cute, she's going to need more than that to succeed in the industry. Miranda auditioned for the competition just two days after her 18th birthday, making her the youngest contestant in the competition. She states that she has been waiting for this opportunity her entire life, and wasn't going to let it slip away. Miranda absolutely hates wearing shoes, and would much rather run around barefoot. In fact, the only part of the competition she dreads is runway, because she has never worn heels in her life. Will Miranda's age and inexperience cost her the title?

BIOGRAPHY:Sarah's dream hasn't always been to be a world renowned supermodel. In fact, she just recently began to pursue an interest in the fashion industry. Sarah passion was to become a huge Broadway star, but after a tracheotomy left her voice low and raspy, Sarah was forced to let go of her dream. Sarah has been doing her homework, studying countless hours about fashion and practicing her runway walk. Sarah says her nerves shouldn't be a problem, due to her experience in music theater, but we'll see how she handles the pressure of the competition.

BIOGRAPHY:Stephanie describes herself as "the girl next door with a twist". When she's not chilling at the beach with friends, she's reading it up on the internet about the latest fashion news. "I've wanted to be a model since I was 11 years old" says Stephanie, "but I didn't want to give up my life and friends here in Cali". Stephanie finally decided that she can't wait any longer, and is going to have to give her dream a try before it's too late. Will Stephanie's performance in the competition be worth the wait?

BIOGRAPHY:As a single mother, Vivian knows she's leaving a lot behind to pursue her dream of becoming a model. She admits that it's tough for her to leave her two children, who are ages 3 and 5, behind, but knows that it will all be worth it in the end. Vivian states that having children at such a young age put a dint in her plans for the future, but says that she wouldn't trade her kids for anything. "Of course having a kid at 18 years old and another at 20 changed my plans for the future, but it made me grow up and realize that it's not all about me anymore." Vivian certainly has the determination, but does she have the talent to go all the way?



07-04-2009, 10:35 AM
Anna-Sophia and Sarah FTW.

07-04-2009, 10:47 AM
anna sophia and milan are my fav. very unique cast :smitten:smitten

07-04-2009, 02:59 PM

07-04-2009, 03:44 PM


The girls arrive at their Hollywood mansion, where they meet Kris.

KRIS: Hello ladies, and welcome to Beautiful's Next Top Model! I'm your host, Kris, former male model, and today the competition begins. Out of the thousands of girls who applied, you are the lucky 13 who get the opportunity to be a top model. Each week, you will have a photoshoot, and based on how well you do, someone will be sent home, until only one of you are left standing. That girl will be Beautiful's Next Top Model! So go inside your amazing new home, pick your rooms, and get to know each other.

The girls run inside screaming, picking out their bedrooms.

Ashley: *confessional* The mansion is frickin' amazing. Seriously, my entire house could fit inside the kitchen.

Miranda: *confessional* Everybody's running around screaming and yelling, in total shock. The house is so beautiful.

Stephanie: *to Kim* Hi, I'm Stephanie.

Kim: I'm Kim. Nice to meet you.

Vivian: *finds a bed, and sits quietly*
CONFESSIONAL: Some of the girls are so loud, and I like to keep to myself. I don't feel like I fit in with most of them because they are so immature. I have two children, so I had to grow up pretty quickly, but a lot of these girls still act like kids themselves.

Lila: *dances through the house* I feel like a fairy princess!
CONFESSIONAL: I love the earth, and my mission is to teach everyone that the earth is dying, and we're killing it, and we need to be more aware of how to better control pollution, and heal mother earth.

Ashley: Who wants to get in the pool?

Ashley, Brandi, Kim, Lila, Miranda, Sarah, and Stephanie all gather in the pool.

Brandi: Dude, this is awesome. I wasn't expecting the house to be the nice.

Sarah: I thought we were all going to be crammed into a tiny apartment or something. Not a mansion. :lol

Ashley: *in confessional* We're all hanging around in the pool, having a great time, and here comes superb****.

Christine walks up

Christine: You're all way too loud, and some of us are trying to have a conversation, so we can barely hear ourselves speak. You need to be aware of others, and stop thinking about yourselves, because we're trying to have a conversation.

Brandi: Alright dude, chill out. We'll calm down.

Christine: First of all, I'm not a "dude", and don't talk to me like I'm one of your "homies", because I'm not. I just need you girls to be quiet. *walks off*

Ashley: What a biotch!

Everyone giggles.

Anna-Sophia: *to Christine* What did you tell them?

Christine: I told them to calm down and stop acting like such animals. Seriously, how did these white trash girls get here?

Anna-Sophia: I know, right? They don't even have the decency to realize that we're trying to talk to eachother. Look at them, that one's taking off her bra. Good God.

Christine: How sickening. I'm going back over there. Something needs to be done. *walks back to the pool*

Christine: Maybe you didn't hear me, but I told you to stop acting like wild animals, and calm down.

Ashley: Maybe we don't want to. If you wanna talk so bad, go inside. We were out here first.

Lila: Like seriously, just chill out and have some fun.

Christine: I'm not getting in that nasty *** pool, especially with you and your saggy milk duds hanging out. Put a bra on, for Christ's sake.

Lila: Come on, go with the flow.

Christine: Ok, that's it. If you all want to act like freaks, you can, but stay away from me. White trash these days.

Brandi: *flips off Christine as she walks away*

Christine and Anna-Sophia walk into the kitchen, and continue their conversation. Meanwhile, Milan and Lorainne are speaking in the next room.

Milan: I just feel I've left so much behind to be here. My grandmother is sick, and my family are struggling, but I know I have to be here in order to make a better life for them.

Lorainne: I understand. Well, I can't really say I understand because my family's pretty wealthy, but I get a sense of what you're feeling.

Milan: That's good. I wish my family have money, but they don't. We left Iran eight years ago to come to America, but it hasn't gone as well as we hope.

Lorainne: It does make life easier, but you just have to remember why you're here, and stay positive.
CONFESSIONAL: My friend in the house so far is Milan. She just seems so sweet, and well-mannered, and I hope she does well.

Vivian calls her children, who are staying with her mother.

Vivian: Hey babies. How are you?
Kids: Good, mommy. When you coming home?
Vivian: Soon, sweeties, soon. Remember why mommy's here?
Kids: To help us.
Vivian: That's right. This is going to help us all out, and I can buy you both new toys.
Kids: New Barbies?
Vivian: Yes, new Barbies. I've gotta go, but I love you both very much. Tell Grandma hello for me.
Kids: We will. Bye mommy.
Vivian: Bye babies. Love you. *hangs up the phone and wipes away tears*

CONFESSIONAL: It's so heartbreaking to be away from them, because I'm missing so much, but I just have to remember that it's all going to be worth it in the end.

Carly sits in her room, drawing skulls.

Carly: *in confessional* I've pretty much been keeping to myself, actually. Just sitting around drawing. I don't really fit in with these girls, because they're all a bunch of plastic barbie dolls. I love modeling, but I didn't think it was for me, because I don't fit the whole "blonde hair, big boobs thing". I want to be here, but I'd be perfectly happy back at home watching slasher movies, going to punk shows.

A new day comes, and the girls see that they have Kris Mail.

Kim: Guys! Kris Mail!

Stephanie: It's a dog-eat-dog world out there. Are you ready for it? You better be today at 6:00. Love Kris.

Kim: What do you guys think it is?

Brandi: Like showing your ferocious side or something?

Christine: No, it has to do something with dogs.

Anna-Sophia: So the Kris Mail says that we better be ready for a dog-eat-dog world today, so we're all thinking we'll be posing with dogs. If so, I dread it, because I can't stand dogs.


Distorted Asylum
07-04-2009, 07:13 PM
Ashley, Brandi, Carly, Lila, Milan, and Miranda FTW!!!

07-04-2009, 07:36 PM
Milan and Sarah FTW!

07-04-2009, 11:42 PM
The girls do the photoshoot.


KRIS: Welcome to your first judging, girls. This week was your first photoshoot, in which you had to pose with dogs, who were all rescued by the Humane Society. Let's begin judging with Anna-Sophia.

Kris:I like the way you're posing, but you look a bit uncomfortable. The shoot director said that you were very timid and didn't give a lot of movement, and that you didn't interact with the dog much. Why is that?
Anna: I'm not really a dog fan, and I just didn't feel comfortable touching it. He looked dirty, and I didn't want to touch him.
Kris: I think that's a pathetic excuse for this photo, to be honest. If you can't handle touching a rescued dog, how are you going to handle the high fashion industry, modeling with snakes and other exotic animals? You're going to be asked to do a lot worse things than touch a dog.

Kris: You look very confident and powerful, but your hair is covering the dog's face, and it kind of ruins the shot. You need to be aware of these things, because any little detail can turn a great photo into a not so good shot.

Kris: I love how slinky and relaxed your pose is, and your face looks pretty good. I would like to see a little more intensity from you, because you've got such an edgy look, and I think it would have worked with this photo.

Kris: Your arms look really stiff, and your face looks uncomfortable. The shoot director commented that you looked very bored and uninspiring, and acted like you didn't really want to be here. Do you want to be here?
Carly: I totally want to be here. I mean, I'm laid back and mellow, so maybe that was mistaken for bored? I don't really know. But I do want to be here. Definitely.

Kris: The sexy expression on your face is great, but I wish you weren't so covered up. Luckily for you, that's the stylist's fault, not yours. With your sexy expression, I wish you would've gotten a more intense dog, because I think it would have been awesome. You did everything right, but I need to have a talk with the stylists.

Kris: You look nervous and scared, like you're afraid you're going to fall over. Unfortunately, I think the dog has become the star of this photograph, because you look so timid and awkward.

Kris: I love your sexy, earthy, and laid back posing and face, and I think that could be your little trademark. The dog's positioning makes this picture look a bit uncomfortable, but we won't get into that. Thanks.
Lila: :lol Ok, thank you!

Kris: The laid back pose is really cool, and I think you're one of the few girl who actually considered your surroundings, and did a pose that fits the background.

Kris: Wow, this is a great photograph. The wind in your hair is beautiful, and I love the cute pose. You became the star of the photo, and I hardly even notice the dog. Terrific.
Milan: Thank you so much.

Kris: Well, who would've thought that the little cute girl could pull of this sexy pose. It's a tad stripperish though, and without the dog, it looks like something I'd find in a mens magazine.
Miranda: Oh no. I didn't mean for it to look like that.

Kris: My problem with you is that you photograph looking older than you actually are. You're one of the youngest girls here, but you don't photograph like you are. The garment swallows you up, but I do think your pose is very good.

Kris: From the waist up, you look great, but once we get to the legs, they look very broken down. Just because you're sitting down doesn't mean you don't have to be aware of your body.
Stephanie: I'll be careful next time, I swear.

Kris: You're not really doing much, you're just kind of standing there, and you aren't aware of your arms. Since you're the oldest girl here at 23, you have to make sure that you are on top of your game every week, because realistically, 23 is too old to just be starting your career.

KRIS: When I call you back, I will announce who is the first girl sent home from Beautiful's Next Top Model.

07-05-2009, 12:08 AM

KRIS: There are 13 lovely ladies standing before me, but I only have 12 photos in my hands. These photographs stand for the 12 girls who are still in the hopes of becoming Beautiful's Next Top Model. The first name I'm going to call will have her photo run as a nationwide ad for the Humane Society. That girl is........

Your picture was hands down my favorite.










Show me next week that you really want this

Will Anna-Sophia and Vivian please step forward?

Anna-Sophia, you're not standing here because you're photo was the worst. There were worse photos than yours, but the excuse that you gave me for your less than impressive photo this week was pitiful, and really p****d me off. If you're going to snub your nose up at an organization nice enough to help us out this week, then I don't want you here.

Vivian, you did nothing to make yourself stand out this week. You basically just stood still through most of your film, and didn't give much variety at all in your face. As I said, if you're just now starting your career at 23, you better be one terrific model, and I didn't see that in your shot.

I only have one photo in my hands. This photo stands for the girl who is still in the running towards becoming Beautiful's Next Top Model. The other girl must pack her things and go home........

Anna-Sophia, if I see that same attitude next week, you're gone. Congratulations, you have made it to next week.

Anna-Sophia: Oh my god, you won't see it next week, I promise. Thank you so much! *sobs*

Vivan: *crying* Thank you for this opportunity. I don't want it to end, but I know it must. Bye girls, bye Kris.

EXITING CONFESSIONAL: I really didn't want to go this week. I can't believe I came all this way and left my children, just to go home first. I let my kids down. *crying* How am I supposed to tell them that all of this wasn't worth anything. *puts her head in her lap and bawls*

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Distorted Asylum
07-05-2009, 06:17 AM
Poor Vivane :(

I loved Milan's photo, I predict that she makes it overseas!:woo

07-05-2009, 01:16 PM

The girls return home from elimination

Stephanie: It was so sad that Vivian left. I didn't get a chance to know her very well.

Brandi: None of us did. She just stayed in her room most of the time. I guess she was missing her kids.

Christine: Well, if she can't stand to be away from her children for the short length of this competition, how does she expect to be away from them for half the year like models have to do? It's for the best that she went home.

Miranda: But she needed this competition to take care of her kids. From what I hear, they're really struggling.

Christine: Well, that's not my problem. She can find other ways to support her family, besides taking up a space in a competition, that she's obviously not strong enough for.

Miranda: But that's...

Sarah: Guys, let's just drop it. She's gone, and there's nothing we can do about it. Let's just go celebrate that we're here for another week.

Most girls go outside by the pool to have drinks, while Carly and Lorainne stay indoors.

Lorainne: Carly, I've noticed you don't talk much. How are you doing?

Carly: *stops drawing* Eh, I'm alright. A little bummed out about my comments at judging.

Lorainne: Oh, the whole "you not wanting it" thing?

Carly: Yeah. I mean, I may not be running around spewing rainbows like all the other girls, but that doesn't mean I don't want it. I wouldn't have come here if I didn't want it. I'd have been perfectly fine back at home watching movies.

Lorainne: I understand. You just can't take Kris' comments too personal. He's just trying to help.

Back outside, Anna-Sophia and Christine are talking.

Anna-Sophia: I just think Kris overreacted at judging. The dog looked like he had fleas. He kept scratching, and I didn't want to touch him. If we have to pose with dogs, we should at least get some properly groomed ones.

Christine: I agree. Those dogs looked filthy. I was about to say something, but I didn't, because I didn't want to be in the bottom 2.

Anna-Sophia: Honestly, you and I are the only girls here with any class.
CONFESSIONAL: Last week, I was in the bottom 2 for "giving attitude". I honestly think the host was just seriously overreacting, and made the situation bigger than what it really was.

Ashley, Lila, Stephanie, and Kim are sitting at a table, eating.

Ashley: *staring at Kim, who is cutting her chicken into slices* Dude, why are you takin' the time to do all that? Just pick it up and tear into it. *picks up a whole piece of chicken and bites into it, leaving crumbs on her mouth*

Kim: :giggle I don't want to get my fingers dirty, and I'm wearing lipstick, so I don't want chicken to stick to my lips.

Ashley: Oh, I understand. You're one of those goody-goody girls, huh?

Kim: :shakehead *gets up and walks away, looking angry*

Ashley: What did I say? *burps*

*all the girls look at her*

Kim: *in confessional* I can't believe Ashley would even say something like that. Just because I use table manners doesn't mean I think I'm better than others. *starts to tear up* That wasn't very nice. *tries to laugh, while wiping away tears*

Milan is standing at the top of a tall hill, looking out at the sky. Lila walks up.

Lila: Whatcha doing?

Milan: Nothing. Just looking at the moon and stars.

Lila: They're beautiful aren't they?

Milan: So beautiful and magical. I like to pretend I'm a bird, flying to the moon, exploring the universe.

Lila: :ponder Wow, is that fun?

Milan: I love it. It makes me feel free.

Lila: I get that feeling a lot. This is a lot cheaper than what I have to do to get it, though.

Milan: How do you mean?

Lila: Nothing. Well, I'm gonna go lay down. See you tomorrow.

Milan: Goodnight. *continues to stare at the moon*

A new day arrives

Brandi: Guys, we've got Kris Mail!

-Congrats top 12, you have survived your first week at Beautiful's Next Top Model. Unfortunately, modeling is no walk in the clouds. Be ready tonight at 6:00 for your next photoshoot-

Miranda: No walk in the clouds?

Lila: Like birds?

Kim: Maybe we'll be in the sky for our photoshoot?

Miranda: *in confessional* So, the Kris Mail says "modeling is no walk in the clouds", so we think that we'll be up in the air for the photoshoot. I'm scared of heights, so hopefully I can pull this off. :giggle


07-05-2009, 01:30 PM
Cheering for Milan. Her shot is gorgeous :D

07-05-2009, 02:56 PM

KRIS: Welcome to judging, girls. This week's photoshoot had you all in a harness, floating in the air in front of a sky background, posing as angels. Let's begin judging with Carly.

I think you look a lot fresher and prettier than last week's photoshoot, and I love the hint of a smile. I do not like the gown on you, and I think the stylist could've made a better choice. I would have liked to seen more movement, but this is a big step up from last week.

I think it's good, but it doesn't blow me away. I wanted to see more energy from you, because this picture is pretty lifeless.

Stephanie needs to take notice of your shot this week, because you're sitting down, must are still aware of your body, and modeling from head to toe. I love the wide-eyed stare, and this is such a cute photo.

The way you're posing makes you look bigger than you actually are, and your face looks so round. I think the face is pretty dead, and you aren't giving much in this photo. Just sitting there and looking pretty won't cut it.

You look so pretty and graceful, and I love the soft pose. This is a lot better than last week's photograph.

Now this photo grabs my attention. You look so soft and cute. I'm not loving the way you have your legs though, because they look like they've been amputated.

There's not much life in your face, and your right leg makes this shot awkward. I think you rely on pretty way too much, and you're not giving much energy in your pictures.

Your face looks uncomfortable, and the pose is way too cutesy. You told me during casting that you want to break away from the "cute mold", so you need to start giving me some high fashion poses, and stop this cute stuff.

I told the stylists to give you the edgiest costume they had, they did, and you pulled it off perfectly. I love your confident facial expression, and you look very regal. This is what I wanted to see last week. You using your edgy look to your advantage.

Ooh, Milan, what happened? This photo is really bad.
Milan: I don't know. I thought I was doing good on set.
Your mouth looks so tense, and you look bigger than what you really are. I don't know if it was an off week for you or what, but this really was your best shot.

I like the way you're playing with the dress, but you look like you only have 1 leg, and I think your face is just ok.

Now this is what I wanted to see last week. You look beautiful, and your film was great. I love how soft you look.

KRIS: When I call you all back, I will announce who will be the second girl eliminated from Beautiful's Next Top Model.

07-05-2009, 03:19 PM

KRIS: 12 beautiful girls stand before me, but I only have 11 photos in my hands. These 11 photos stand for the girls who are still in the hopes of becoming Beautiful's Next Top Model. The first name I am going to call, who will have her picture displayed in the house as digital art for 1 week is........

This shot is gorgeous, and you changed your attitude this week. Great job.









I think this week may have just been a fluke, but if it wasn't, you need to practice like you've never practiced before, because this was a let down.

Will Sarah and Miranda please step forward.

Sarah, it seems like you are just resting on pretty from week to week, and not giving any energy or enthusiasm.

Miranda, I remember the first thing you told me at casting was "I want people to stop telling me I'm so cute", but this week, you gave me nothing but cute throughout your entire film.

I only have 1 photo in my hands. If I don't call your name, you must pack your bags and go home.

I don't want to see anymore cute from you, so start giving me some fashion poses. Congratulations.

Miranda: *cries* Oh my goodness, thank you. *hugs Sarah*

Sarah: *looks disappointed* Ok, thank you.

EXITING CONFESSIONAL: I really wanted to stay in the house, but if it's my time, it's my time. I think I could've done a lot better if I was given the chance, but life's never fair, I guess. I'll miss a lot of the girls, and hopefully we can keep in touch.



07-05-2009, 03:23 PM
EPISODE 3 PREVIEW: On next week's episode, the girls get makeovers, which brings one girl to tears. Then, the final 11 must show off their bodies in a swimsuit shot, where one will be eliminated.

07-05-2009, 03:29 PM
oh I liked sarah :(

Distorted Asylum
07-05-2009, 06:39 PM
Poor Sarah, but I'm glad Miranda stayed.

07-05-2009, 06:41 PM
Wow, what a disappointment from Milan.

And I don't think Sarah should've gone. I actually like her photo.

07-07-2009, 10:50 AM

07-07-2009, 11:17 AM

The girls return home from elimination.

Brandi: I can't believe Sarah's gone. I didn't think her shot was that bad.

Christine: She wasn't delivering, so she deserved to go. She wasn't even on the same level as most of us.

Ashley: And who are you to be talking? Your picture SUCKED! You looked fat.

Christine: Honey, I do Pilates every day, so don't talk to me about looking fat. You're borderline plus-size, so you might want to lay off the Twinkies. :zsnap

Ashley: *looks at Brandi* What did this b**** just say to me?

Brandi: She said you were borderline plus-sized.

Ashley: I'll tell ya who's borderline plus sized. You with your saggy, cellulite *** jigglin' all over the place. Your double chins, and flabby arms! You got more chins than a Chinese phone book! When the doctor first saw you, he slapped your momma instead.

Christine: Says the meth addict who has no mother. *smirks*

Ashley: *throws a glass bottle at Christine, but it misses* *Brandi and Stephanie drag Ashley away* B****, your *** is mine! *kicking, trying to break out of Brandi and Stephanie's arms*

Stephanie: Calm down, calm down. Let it go.

Brandi: Chill, chill.

Christine: :lol:lol:lol:lol:lol:lol:lol:lol

Anna-Sophia: *walks up* What trailer trash. :hand

Brandi and Stephanie take Ashley to her bedroom, and calm her down.

Ashley: I can't believe she had the nerve to say that to me.

Brandi: She'll get what's coming to her, believe me. You can't be doing this or you'll get yourself disqualified.

Stephanie: Just stay away from her, don't talk to her, don't do anything.

Ashley: I will, but the next time she says something to me I swear I'm gonna kill her.

Stephanie: *in confessional* I've never seen Ashley flip out like that. She just snapped and started throwing bottles and Christine. Christine was wrong for saying that to Ash, but she's gotta learn to stop acting like this.

Milan, Lorainne, Lila, and Miranda all sit on Milan's bed.

Milan: I don't know what went wrong last week. I tried my hardest, but my photo was not good.

Lorainne: Don't worry about it. I'm sure you'll do a lot better this week.

Milan: I don't know. I'll try. I really will.

Lila: Just keep on keeping on, baby. Don't let it get you down.

Miranda: Yeah, I was in the bottom 2 last week, but I know I have to do better this week.
CONFESSIONAL: It's so depressing seeing Milan like this. Out of everyone here, I think she wants this the most, and I want to see her do well. Being in the bottom 2 last week made me realize that I have to really do great this week.

Anna-Sophia discovers Kris Mail on the table.

Anna-Sophia: Kris Mail!

-Models must be able to adapt to anything, especially new looks. Be ready tomorrow at 7:00am, because a change is gonna come-

Christine: Makeovers. No way. I hope they don't mess me up. Psssh. Like that's possible. :D

Carly: *in confessional* So, we learn that we're getting makeovers, and I'm not that nervous. I've done so much to my hair in the past. I've shaved it off, I've had dreads, pink hair, blue hair. There's not much else you can do to it, so I'm good.

07-07-2009, 11:41 AM

KRIS: Hello ladies! Guess what today is!


KRIS: That's right, makeovers. As a model, your look is going to change frequently, but today, I'm here to make you girls look more like models. So, let's get to it. When we finish your makeover, you're going to take a photo to show off your new look in bikinis, where the theme will be "Summer of Peace".

ANNA-SOPHIA- We're going to cut your hair to your chin, and make it just a little lighter.

http://i42.tinypic.com/2i8ivwi.jpg http://i26.tinypic.com/x1c035.jpg

ASHLEY- You're getting longer, chocolate brown hair, with side bangs.

http://i42.tinypic.com/107s08i.jpg http://i28.tinypic.com/mjy450.jpg

BRANDI- We're making your hair shorter, spikier, and brown.

http://i43.tinypic.com/9hrhx1.jpg http://i32.tinypic.com/hwycr8.jpg

CARLY- That hair is so flat to your head, so we're giving you a curly blonde weave.

http://i44.tinypic.com/21j0obk.jpg http://i27.tinypic.com/jja8ba.jpg

CHRISTINE- We're cutting your hair to your chin, but keeping your edgy black color.

http://i41.tinypic.com/28bsnyf.jpg http://i31.tinypic.com/30utoph.jpg

KIM- You've got the right idea with that cut, but we're making it redder, and cutting the bangs.

http://i41.tinypic.com/156y1rk.jpg http://i31.tinypic.com/2jepbww.jpg

LILA- It's going red and curly, with side bangs.

http://i43.tinypic.com/14wzodg.jpg http://i32.tinypic.com/14k85xw.jpg

LORAINNE- We're cutting your hair short, and dying it black.

http://i41.tinypic.com/2coiiax.jpg http://i30.tinypic.com/vfjwn8.jpg

MILAN- We're giving you some volume.

http://i42.tinypic.com/4qlwmg.jpg http://i26.tinypic.com/2eoi7bl.jpg

MIRANDA- We're getting rid of those cute girls and giving you some edgy angles to your hair.

http://i39.tinypic.com/x273vr.jpg http://i27.tinypic.com/2j5na6o.jpg

STEPHANIE- It's going to be cut a little shorter, and dyed blonde, and we're cutting your bangs.

http://i44.tinypic.com/5kn0a9.jpg http://i32.tinypic.com/2aac0n4.jpg


07-07-2009, 07:06 PM
There's just not enough swimsuits on Elouai to do a swimsuit shoot right now, so I'm changing the photoshoot. I'm gonna watch the premiere of 10 Things I Hate About You right now :lol, so I'll post the rest of the episode later.

07-08-2009, 01:09 AM
wow,great makeover, most of them look much better now :smitten

07-08-2009, 11:25 AM

The girls return home from makeovers.

Carly: *looks at herself in the mirror* Wow, this is so different from anything I've had before. I've never had blonde, curly hair before. I feel like Shirley Temple. *laughs*

Lorainne: I think you look great. I'm not sure about mine. *messes with her hair in the mirror*
CONFESSIONAL: My new haircut is so high fashion, but it's too short for my tastes. I don't feel like a lady. *starts to tear* It's just not what I imagined at all.

Kim and Miranda sit outside, eating.

Kim: We didn't really get much done to us, which is awesome. I liked my hair before.

Miranda: Speak for yourself. I had to give up my cute curls I've had since I was a kid. At least I won't be called cute anymore.

Brandi and Ashley stand in the bathroom, looking in the mirror.

Brandi: *spiking her hair* My new hair is kick ***. It's awesome.

Ashley: I wish I would've gotten something edgier. This is going to be so hard to maintain.

Brandi: I've never had long hair before in my life. I can't stand it. Feels like spiders.

Milan is sitting at the table, eating. Lila walks up and sits down with her.

Lila: Do you look your new do, Milan?

Milan: Pardon?

Lila: :lol Do you like your haircut?

Milan: I think it's beautiful. Makes me feel more like a model.

Lila: I used to have red hair as a little girl, but I always got teased for it, so I dyed it blonde. This hair makes me feel like a kid again. *tosses hair*

Stephanie is asleep on the couch, while Anna-Sophia and Christine talk on the chairs beside her.

Christine: I still can't believe what Trailer Park did to me this morning. How can people be this trashy?

Anna-Sophia: Her parents, excuse me, her dad... *both girls laugh* probably never taught the poor thing how to act human.

Christine: And what really ticks me off is how those two idiots came to her side and pretended to "rescue me". Like I was afraid of her. Please. :hand

Lila discovers Kris Mail sitting on a cabinet.

Lila: Guys! Kris Mail's here!

-Ladies, turn around-

Lila: Turn around? What the... *turns around, and sees Kris standing behind her*

Everyone screams

Kris: Hey ladies!

Miranda: *runs to wake up Stephanie*

Kris: Tomorrow will be your third photoshoot. The theme is "High School Stereotypes". Each of you will be assigned a stereotype, and have to portray it in the photoshoot. These were decided randomly, and here are your stereotypes.

ASHLEY: The Flirt
BRANDI: Class Clown
CARLY: Student Body President
KIM: Goth Girl
LILA: Preppy Girl
LORAINNE: Ditzy Cheerleader
MILAN: Stoner Girl
MIRANDA: Mean Girl
STEPHANIE: Athletic Girl

Kris: Don't be afraid to have fun with these, and really go for it. Good luck!

Kris leaves.

Christine: Ugh, I got band geek? Are you kidding me?

Anna-Sophia: And I get the nerd? These better have been decided randomly, I'll tell you that.

Milan: What is stoner girl?

Stephanie: Like the girl who's on drugs, and sits around strung out.

Milan: Oh. Ok.

Distorted Asylum
07-12-2009, 01:09 PM
I can't wait for the next photo shoot :smitten

07-12-2009, 02:02 PM
Sorry this week has been so slow. Haven't had much time to get on. The photos will most likely be posted later today.

08-14-2009, 08:43 AM
I like Steph's makeover the best.

08-21-2009, 02:36 AM
Sorry that I let this fan fiction die. I don't have too much to get on but I would like to finish this. There will not be much role-playing but I will try my best to finish this. I'm doing the shoots now.

08-29-2009, 01:07 PM
I really like Ashley.
I hope someone uses her for a season of ENTM.

10-21-2009, 03:34 AM

Kris: Hey girls. There's 11 of you left, but only 10 will continue after tonight's cut. Your photoshoot this week was high school stereotypes. You guys were allowed to have fun with it, but you still had to remember the modelling part too. We're starting with Anna-Sophia.

Alright, let's have a look at your best photo.
I think you've definitely captured the nerdy persona well, but I don't feel that you're really pushing through and giving it your all. You kind of get lost behind all the clothes, hair and glasses.

Ashley, you're up next.
I think it's cute and it sure does have a sexiness about it. I like the little wink. You brought some fun to it but still kept it modelly. Good job.

Up next is Brandi.
I think out of all the girls this week, you went for it the most. You didn't hold back and you weren't afraid to take risks. I like it as a comedic photo but I don't really see a model here.

Please come forward Carly.
I like it. You look posh and refined, and very classy. I like the simple pose and you seemed to control yourself on set better than usual.
Carly: I really enjoyed this one. Thanks.

Christine, you're up.
Hmmm.... I'm not sure what to think. It's not a bad picture, but it's not great either. It's just boring and uninteresting to look at. You're just standing there and not doing much at all. Do you have an explanation for that, or...
Christine: I don't know, I just didn't feel comfortable or anything like myself. I wasn't sure how to be a band geek.
Well as a model, it's not always about what you feel comfortable doing. Sometimes you have to suck it up and commit no matter what.

Next up is Kim.
Wow! There's a lot of intensity and power coming from your eyes which is something I haven't seen from you. This is a whole other side to you and I love it. Great job.

Lila, it's your turn.
It's good. You look pretty and confident, and you seem to have pulled off the preppy look really well. It's not terrific, but it's solid.

Now it's time for Lorainne.
The body's pretty good but that face looks so fake to me. It looks like really bad acting to me and I just don't think you pulled it off well.

Milan, dear it's your turn.
You look tired and strung out, which is exactly what you needed to look like for your stereotype. I like how relaxed and calm you look. Nice job.

Come forward please Miranda.
I really, really love this. You have attitude and a real evil look to you and it's great. That makeover really helped you step away from the cute. Great job.

And up last is Stephanie.
I wanted to see more from you this week and you didn't deliver. You're just standing there and you look rather blank. There's some intensity in the face but not much. I'm disappointed this week.

Kris: OK girls. When I call you back someone will be going home.

10-21-2009, 04:04 AM
Week 3 Elimination

Kris: 11 girls, but only 10 photos in my hand. If I call your name, you are one step closer to becoming Beautiful's Next Top Model. If I don't call your name, then you must pack your bags and go home. The best photo this week and first call out goes to............

Miranda. It looks like that haircut did a complete transformation to you. Congratulations!









Will Christine and Lorainne please step forward?

Christine, you had a great week in week 1, but you've been slipping since. I'm thinking the first week might have just been luck. I also think that modelling might not be the place for you because if you don't want to do something, you don't commit to it.

Lorainne, I thought your edgy haircut would make you more modelesque, but your photo this week was not good. I don't know if you're able to stop the over acting and work on giving real emotion.

Only one picture in my hand.............

Lorainne, you get another chance. Drop the fake stuff and give me more realness.

Thanks Christine. I think you need to sit down and think if this is the place for you because modeling requires some sacrifices. Thank you.

.Christine's Exit Speech.

Christine: :cry I honestly cannot believe this. I thought that I would win and to be going home third is just a huge slap in the face. If I didn't want to model I would have never come here. I think if I would have been given just one more chance I would have rocked it but if that's the way Kris feels then that's the way he feels. I'm just still in utter shock.



Distorted Asylum
10-21-2009, 04:38 PM
I really hope you continue doing this. It's very creative and each girl is likable.

10-21-2009, 04:52 PM
Aw I liked her :cry :cry

Miranda FTW now :yay

10-21-2009, 04:54 PM
I really like these girls. Milan is my absolute favorite.

10-22-2009, 04:35 AM
Thanks for the good comments guys. I will try my hardest to finish this. I've got the photos for this week ready, so all I have to do is type the episode.

10-22-2009, 05:05 AM

The girls walk in the front door, exhausted from elimination.

Lorainne Confessional: I was in the bottom 2 last week, and I can honestly say that I've never been that nervous in my entire life. It's definitely given me a wake up call and I now that I need to keep my focus on the prize now more than ever.

Miranda: *smiling and jumping around* Yay, I got a first call-out!
CONFESSIONAL: Last week I had the best photo of the bunch, and I am so proud of myself. I made such a huge improvement in a very small amount of time.

Lila and Lorainne are in the kitchen, leaning against the counter.

Lila: Was it scary being in the bottom 2?

Lorainne: Oh my gosh, my heart was pounding out of my chest. I thought I was going home.

Lila: I'm glad you didn't, though. Christine brought so much negative energy to the house.
CONFESSIONAL:I thought last week's elimination was the right choice. Not only was Christine's photos not up to par, but she was very cocky and thought she was better than the rest of us, so...yeah. Not too sad to see her leave.

Carly, Milan, and Stephanie sit in the living room.

Milan: I'm glad I did good job in last week's photo shoot and that I'm here another week.

Carly: Dude, I don't know why you're worried. Kris loves you. There's no way you're going anytime soon.

Milan: He does?

Carly: Uh...yeah. It's obvious that you're his favorite. I mean he loves everything that you do. *eats popcorn*

Milan: But he didn't like my photo that one week.

Stephanie: Were you in the bottom 2? Noooooo....

Milan looks sad and gets up and leaves. Stephanie and Carly look at each other and roll their eyes.

Carly and Stephanie in Shared Confessional:
Carly: So Milan is totally over-praised for her photos...
Stephanie: Yeah and she doesn't seem to get it. She like takes an average photo and gets way too much credit for it.
Carly: It's like obvious bias going on.

Milan's Confessional: *crying* Some of the girls were talking about me saying that I don't take good pictures and keep getting good comments from Mr. Kris, but that's not true. I work hard and I do good job. I don't know why they're being mean to me.

Ashley and Brandi are in the hot tub. Anna-Sophia is sitting at the table a few feet down from the hot tub, drinking.

Brandi: We got one b*tch out. :lol

Ashley: One more to go.

Brandi: *whispering as the camera shows Anna-Sophia* Seriously, she is like so lost without Christine here. It's pathetic.

Anna-Sophia's Confessional: I hated seeing Christine go last week. She was my only friend in the house and the only girl that I related to and had a connection with. The rest of these girls are just fake and I don't want anything to do with them.

Kim finds the Kris Mail on the washing machine.

Kim: Kris Mail!
-Hope you're feeling pretty and girly, and ready to show your true colors. Love Kris-

Stephanie: Like pink, maybe?

Miranda's Confessional: So the Kris Mail hints to a photoshoot incorporating pink. I hope we're right because I love pink! It's my most favoritest color. :smitten

10-22-2009, 05:28 AM

Kris: Hi girls. Welcome to panel. There's only 10 of you left, but after tonight, only 9 will be left standing. This week's shoot was all about the color pink. We wanted you all to bring out that girly side but still be yourself. First up we have Brandi.

I really like the pose. I think it's confident and fierce, but your face just isn't on point. You look confused and rather lost. What went wrong there?
Brandi: I don't know. I guess I was kind of lost, actually. I'm not trying to make excuses but I've never been the girly-girl, so this was kind of difficult for me. I still know I could've done better.

Anna-Sophia, you're next.
You look very pretty and glamorous but it's all a bit too girl in the mall for me. The pose is just alright, but I think the face is very beautiful. Not your best, but alright.

Please come forward Lila.
Love it. The pose is great, the face is great, you look confident. I think this is your best picture so far.
Lila:Wow. Thank you so much.

Up next is Carly.
You look surprised, but it works here. You look very pretty and sweet, and I know that you're more of the rebel-type. How did you find this side of you?
Carly: :lol Some girls gave me a few tips on how to be more girly and bubbly. I guess they worked.

Stephanie, it's your turn.
It's nice. Definitely not your best photo, and it's actually quite bland. There's not much there than a pretty face. I need to see some true emotion and energy from you.

Alright, up next is Miranda.
You look pretty, but you have a rather round face, and it didn't photograph too well this week. I love your body, but your face shape is just really round.
Miranda: :lol Yeah, I'm a little chunky.
Kris: You're not chunky, but you are the heaviest girl here, so maybe just watch your calories a little, because I think you've put on a bit of weight since you've gotten here. Am I correct?
Miranda: *nods her head yes*

Ashley is next up.
You look confident and very beautiful. I love that you put some motion in your picture. I like it. Very good.

Now it is time for Kim.
I love that broken down pose you're doing. The face is very deer in headlights, but I think it works for this shoot.

Lorainne is now up.
This is very sexy Lorainne. You look nice and confident, and I really like that pose you're giving. This is the first sexy shot I've seen of you. How did you do it?
Lorainne: I just really wanted to step up my game this week and deliver something that would grab your attention.

And finally, Milan.
It's very simple, but it's also very pretty. You're selling the bag, and I think you look nice. Not as good as I've seen from you, but you still did a very good job.

Kris: OK girls. When I call you back, someone is going home.

10-22-2009, 05:51 AM

Kris: 10 girls, but only 9 photos are in my hand. One of you has to go home. The first name I am going to call is.......................

Lila. You did a great job.








Will Brandi and Stephanie please step forward?

Brandi, you are a very edgy girl. You do high-fashion so well, but when this week's commercial photo shoot came around, you didn't do very well at all. It makes me wonder if you're just a one-dimensional model.

Stephanie, you are beautiful, and have the look of a top model, but your photos always seem to lack personality and life. To me, it seems that you are just resting on your looks.

Who goes home?

Brandi. I want to see some diversity from you, so work on your commercial side. Congratulations.

Thanks Stephanie. You are such a pretty girl but you have to bring some life to your shots.

Stephanie: Thanks. *hugs the girls and leaves*


Stephanie: Of course I'm sad to be leaving but I did my best and I guess I came up short. I will never give up modeling. I'm gonna make it. Some how, some way. I just really wanted to win though.


10-22-2009, 08:43 AM
I'd love to see Ashley on ENTM.

Distorted Asylum
10-22-2009, 05:01 PM
Right girl left :woo

I'm gonna predict an elimination order and see if I get any right just for fun.

9. Kim
8. Lorainne
7. Carly
6. Anna-Sophia
5. Lila
4. Carly
3. Brandi
2. Ashley
BNTM: Milan

10-22-2009, 09:56 PM
If anyone's interested in being Ashley or any of the other girls in Elouai's Next Top Model, you can write me and I'll give you their numbers.

I'm hoping to do the next episode tonight.

10-22-2009, 10:13 PM
Lorainne is stunning :love

And from Ohio :woo

10-22-2009, 10:17 PM
Anna - Sophia is stunning :love

Lila & Ashley look so great with their make overs :smitten

10-22-2009, 11:14 PM

The girls get home from elimination and find a note from Stephanie on the table. Carly picks it up and reads it.

Carly: Bye guys. Keep on keeping on. Especially you, Carls. Love ya! -Steph.

Carly's Confessional: Stephanie went home last week, and I was so upset. She was the first friend I made here so it was bittersweet to watch her leave, because I know this is a competition...so I have to take it like it's any other girl leaving.

Miranda, Ashley, and Brandi all practice their runway walks. Ashley gives a fierce, Aminat-style walk. Miranda starts to walk.

Ashley: Go a little slower. It's all a bit rushed.

Brandi: Yeah, and stop swaying your hips so much.

Miranda: You guys don't like it?

Both: Like, it's good, but it needs a little work.

Miranda: *tries to fix it a little, but it's still pretty much the same*

Brandi: You're still too fast. Slow down.

Miranda: Well, this is how my walk has always been, and I can't just change it. I like it personally, so... *continues to walk*

Ashley and Brandi roll their eyes and whisper about Miranda.

Ashley: I hope she doesn't fall. The whole house will come down.

Brandi: :lol

Ashley's Confessional: So we're practicing our walks, and me and Brandi were just trying to give Miranda some tips, and she gets all defensive and acts like she doesn't need our advice. OK, whatever. Go ahead and get eliminated with your bad self.

Anna-Sophia goes into the bathroom to take a shower. Milan is already in there, and has been for some time.

Anna-Sophia: Hey Milan, you've been in there forever, and I need to take a shower!

Milan (yelling from the shower): Sorry! I be out in just a few minutes!

Anna-Sophia: No. I need it now! You've been in there too long! There's other people here besides you.

Milan: I've got to finish rinsing my hair and I'll be out!

Anna-Sophia: Hurry up!

Another minute passes by and Milan is still in the shower. Anna-Sophia gets mad, cuts off the light, and shuts the door, leaving Milan in the dark.

Milan: Hey! Cut the light back on! I need out! Please! I can't see! Someone help!

Kim hears Milan screaming, and goes to help her.

Kim: Who cut the light out?

Milan: I guess it was Anna. She was mad because I take too long in shower.

Anna-Sophia walks back in.

Anna-Sophia: Finally. Move. I need to take a shower.

Kim: Why did you shut her up in here? That was rude.

Anna-Sophia: She was taking way too long. I needed the shower.

Kim: She could have tried to get out and fell. You don't do that to people.

Anna-Sophia: God, you're retarded.

Kim: Come on Milan. Let's go paint each other's toe nails.
CONFESSIONAL: Anna-Sophia has become such a rude person, and she's too pretty to be acting like she does. She needs an attitude adjustment because she's being mean to everyone.

Lila finds the Kris Mail on the floor. She picks it up.

-It's time to shake off all your problems on the dance floor. Love Kris.-

Kim: Dancing!

Lorainne: Oh boy.
CONFESSIONAL: I have absolutely no idea how to dance. I'll look like a fool on that dance floor. I know it.

10-22-2009, 11:35 PM

Kris: Hey ladies. There's only 9 of you left, but 1 of you have to go home tonight. This week's shoot was a little different. All of you had to dance on the dance floor, and a shot was taken of you on that dance floor. Let's see how you all did. Starting with Anna-Sophia.

I love the body. It has a really nice shape and you've worked well with your limbs. The face is strong too, but a little more power would have made it better.

Lila is up next.
This is great. There's so much fire coming from your eyes and you look so beautiful and sexy. I love the styling.

Now it's time for Ashley.
It's great how you've thrown your hip out and gave yourself a nice curve to your body. You look very sexy and your face is gorgeous.

Up next is Lorainne.
It's a pretty good photo but it's not amazing. Your face looks nice, and the body is good. I like how quirky you look though.

Brandi, you're up.
You have a great pose, and your face is also really good. I like that you gave a little smile this week and showed me that you are trying to be more commercial.
Brandi: Thanks. I was trying to show you that I am versatile.

Time for Milan.
It's just very mediocre for me. I don't see a lot of passion or excitement in this picture. Your face and pose are quite dull.

Carly is next.
I don't know about this one. You've lost your neck and your face is pretty much dead. You just look too stiff.

Next up is Miranda.
I think the pose is pretty good. Not amazing but good. The face is just alright for me. You look worried, and that's not what I wanted to see.

And last but not least is Kim.
Woah. This is smoking hot. I didn't know you could do this Kim. You just keep surprising me. Your body looks amazing and I love your face.

Kris: When I call you back, someone is going home.