View Full Version : (ELIMINATIONS) Make Me A Top Model;

06-18-2010, 10:37 PM
with Clayton Greer

Clayton| |voiceover, photos of the girls flash| I searched all across the USA, and found twelve lucky girls to compete in a chance to become a top model.

The first girl in is a shy, quiet girl from New Orleans
Biancka Stanford, Seventeen, New Orleans, Louisiana
Clayton| Hello, Biancka.
Biancka| Hi.. I am Biancka.
Clayton| Yessss, I know that. May I ask you, how tall are you?
Biancka| 6'0.
Clayton| It really shows in this picture. I love your height. Also, those eyes of yours are breathtaking.
Biancka| Thanks.....

The next girl in is an exotic, ice blond girl

Eromi Perera, Nineteen, New York City, New York
Clayton| Hello Eromi!
Eromi| Hi.
Clayton| Why do you want to model?
Eromi| I want to model because it is a great way to make money, and it has been a great hobby for me ever since I was a little girl.
Clayton| Thank you Eromi.

A girl with platinum blond hair, and brown eyes walks in
Estelle Warren, Twenty-two, Charlotte, North Carolina
Clayton| You are so stunning!
Estelle| Oh....really?
Clayton| Yes, yes you are.
Estelle| Thank you! No one has really ever told me that.
Clayton| They have not?
Estelle| Actually-I was teased for being the ugly girl in school. They said I was 'too weird' for the popular girls. It really hurt, because all I wanted was to fit in.
Clayton| Thank you, Estelle.

The next girl up is plus sized, blue eyed, tanned skinned
Fiona Gatewood, Twenty, Portland, Oregon
Clayton| I love your eyes.
Fiona| Thank you so much!
Clayton| You are welcome. Why do you want to model?
Fiona| I want to model because I have always had a passion for being in front of a camera. I do not know why, but cameras have always fascinated me, and I know that with my weight, it is hard to make it in the industry. But with this competition, I can prove myself.
Clayton| Thank you, Fiona.

Next in is a quirky french girl
Franky Bonnet, Nineteen, Marseille, France
Clayton| So you still reside in France?
Franky| Yes. I had to fly out to America to get here to the audition. It cost many franc to get down here, but I hope it is worth it.
Clayton| Interesting....., so why do you want to model?
Franky| Because modeling has been something disapproved for my family, and I want to change my parent's minds. They did not like me flying to America to get here.
Clayton| Okay, thanks Franky.

An African-American girl walks in
Ivy Taban, Twenty, Miami, Florida
Clayton| You are fierce, girl!
Ivy| I know right? I am the b$%ch!
Clayton| :lol, Why do you want to be a model?
Ivy| Because I think that I have a stunning face, great for beauty ads, anything. I also have a great body, and I can work for fashion shows!
Clayton| Thanks, Ivy.

Next in is an awkward, wide eyed girl
Jade Perry, Nineteen, Grand Rapids, Michigan
Clayton| OMG your eyes!
Jade| Haaa, a lot of people tell me that I have odd eyes.
Clayton| They are not odd, they are beautiful!
Jade| Thank you!
Clayton| It says here that you had a struggle in life, can you explain that to me?
Jade| My anorexia. I struggled with it for a long time.
Clayton| Thank you, Jade.

The next girl up is blond haired, blue eyed.
Jasmine Fisher, Twenty-three, Reno, Nevada
Clayton| Hello!
Jasmine| Hi! I am so excited to meet you!
Clayton| Aw, thanks. So, why do you want to become a top model?
Jasmine| My mom was a model in her younger years. She got the cover of Las Vegas weekly, and that inspired me.
Clayton| Thanks, Jasmine.

The next girl in is an African-American girl
Markeeta West, Twenty-one, Harlem, New York
Clayton| Hello, Markeeta.
Markeeta| Hi!
Clayton| Well, tell me about yourself.
Markeeta| I am currently going to school to become a nurse, because I love taking care of people. But, I also feel that I should be a model. I tried out for this competition because I felt like I needed to take a break from school's craziness, and try live one of my biggest dreams.

A bald, African-American girl walks in
Mya Coleman, Eighteen, Chicago, Illinois
Clayton| :surrender You are too stunning!
Mya| Aw, thank you.
Clayton| I love your skin tone.
Mya| Thank you! I want to be a model so bad. My original country does not approve of modeling, and I want to prove to them that I can be a supermodel.
Clayton| Thank you, Mya!

A set of plus sized twins walk in dressed in the same outfit
Padra and Paula Gallini, Nineteen, Baltimore, Maryland
Clayton| Well look at you two. Dressed the same.
Padra| It is something that we do. We always go everywhere with each other, wear the same clothes, everything.
Paula| Yeah! We totally do that, right Padraaaaaaa? [/annoying twin]
Clayton| Riiiight. Thank you two!

06-18-2010, 10:42 PM
omg, I love everyone! This is such a diverse cast~ My favourite is Jade.

06-18-2010, 10:50 PM
I adore Estelle,Fiona and Mya :love

this is really such a diverse cast, I loveeee it :smitten

06-18-2010, 10:52 PM
LOVE THEM ALL TBH :surrender

06-18-2010, 11:16 PM

Clayton| Hello, ladies. This is your first elimination. In ten seconds, this curtain will drop, and the final ten will be revealed.












Paula| I am very sad to be eliminated right now. I just hope that things will work out for me in the future.

Fiona| Ugh, I hate that I am eliminated. Oh well, I know that things will work out for me. You will see me on the cover of magazines, and in runway shows. Just wait!

06-19-2010, 12:15 AM
Eromi, Estelle, IVY :smitten , MARKEETA :love , Padra, and PAULA :smize

OH @ Paula getting eliminated :cry

She is SOOOOOOOOOOOO much better than Padra

06-19-2010, 12:20 AM
Estelle looks like Rae from C13 :smitten. And she's from NC! She has to win. :love

06-19-2010, 01:24 AM

06-19-2010, 07:23 AM
OMG this fanfic looks SO amazing Clayton :smitten
Biancka, Estelle, Ivy, Jasmine, Mya :cheer

06-19-2010, 08:09 AM
Love everyone! :love I preferred Paula over Padra though, but the cast is amazing.
Franky and Jasmine are my favorites.

06-19-2010, 09:37 AM
OMG @ this :love

I love Estelle, Ivy, Jasmine, and Mya.

Distorted Asylum
06-19-2010, 09:56 AM
This is awesome. Love the cast :woo

06-19-2010, 10:26 AM
Mya/Ivy/Eromi FTW :love

Tyler Neal
06-19-2010, 10:30 AM
Ivy is gorgeous. :smitten

06-19-2010, 11:32 PM
I have a problem; I can not think of any photoshoots. Any suggestions? (:

06-19-2010, 11:37 PM
I think it would be awesome if you based photoshoots off of fashion mag editorials irl.
Like particular editorials you love, translating them into shoots. :love

06-22-2010, 06:58 PM

06-23-2010, 02:25 AM
It is being continued, bb. I am taking my time with it instead of rushing.

06-29-2010, 12:06 PM

|all of the girls arrive at their model mansion|

Mya| This place is amazing!

Biancka| I know, right?

Eromi| This is just like a dream right now. I can not believe it.

|Franky and Jasmine are talking|

Franky| So, how are you? I am Franky.

Jasmine| I am fine. My name is Jasmine, btw.

Franky| Nice to meet you.

|Meanwhile, Jade is sitting on the sofa, drawing. Padra walks up to her|

Padra| Hi. I am Padra. What are you drawing?

Jade| A skull. Drawing helps me reflect my inner thoughts. My favorite drawing of mine was my ghost Egyptian dance.

Padra| And that drawing was reflected from.........your thoughts?

Jade| Yes.

Padra| Oookay....

Estelle| |CONFESSIONAL| I was always the ugly girl in school. I was teased constantly because of my 'odd' face. But I entered this competition to show them that I am beautiful.

06-29-2010, 03:43 PM
wow estelle is so gorgeous , :shame the people who called her ugly

06-30-2010, 05:03 PM
Oh. Love the cast, another amazing fan fic :love.

Go Biancka. Estelle. Jasmine. Markeeta. Pandra. Mya :smitten

07-09-2010, 12:08 AM
This is being continued, guys! Please comment. <3

Distorted Asylum
07-09-2010, 12:41 AM
:woo so glad this is continuing! When's the next epi?

07-09-2010, 12:48 AM
Most likely tomorrow. I am happy to continue it, also.

07-19-2010, 07:21 AM
Bump. This is being continued! :woo

Typing judging tbh.

07-19-2010, 07:59 AM

Clayton| Welcome to your first judging, ladies. This week you had ads for Estee Lauder's new perfume, Sensous. Lets see the best photos! Biancka is first.

This is stunning, Biancka, but it does not evoke a perfume ad. The pose is a little too casual. Eromi is next.

Eromi, you look a littleeeee sleepy here. I do not think that you tried your hardest. You had a little spat with the photographer, and that is something that you do not do in the modeling world. Estelle is up next.

Estelle! This is the most gorgeous thing! It really shows a perfume ad look, and you have a gorgeous face that any model would die for. Franky is next.

Franky, this photo has this elegance and poise to it, and your face looks really beautiful here. Ivy is up next.

This is lovely, but you look a little short here. You lost your neck, and the more neck the better. Jade is next.

Jade, this is stunning. You have these breathtaking eyes, and they light up the photo. Jasmine is up next.

Jasmine, this does not really look like a perfume ad. I mean, it is beautiful, but the pose is a little extreme for a perfume ad. Markeeta is next up.

This is lovely, Markeeta. The sitting pose is great, and you look graceful and elegant here. Nice job. Mya is next.

The pose is fierce! You have this skintone that is beautiful, and I love this photo. Padra is last but not least.

Padra, this is nice, but it does not seem like an ad that I would see. You need to spice up your posing, or you will fall flat.

Clayton| When I call you back one of you will be eliminated.

07-19-2010, 08:01 AM

Clayton| Ten stunning girls stand before me but I only have nine photos in my hands. The girl with the best photo will receive their photo as digital art in the house. The first name that I am going to call is









Will Eromi and Padra please step forward?

Eromi, you are a beautiful girl, but your photo was not fit for a perfume ad.

Padra, like I said, your posing needed to improve. You are a beautiful girl, and I want to see you succeed in this industry.

So who gets a second chance?


Padra, I know that you can succeed in this industry. Maybe just not with this competition.

Padra| Of course I am upset to be eliminated, but y'know, it is fine. I know that I can make it in this industry.


07-19-2010, 09:10 AM
Gorgeous girls :love Estelle is love.

07-19-2010, 09:22 AM
aww I liked her :cry

Biancka did the best to me, this girls are so amazing Clayton :love

07-19-2010, 01:12 PM
I like everyone :smitten
Jasmine and Eromi are my favorites.

07-25-2010, 02:59 AM
Next episode soon!