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Clayton
06-18-2010, 10:37 PM
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with Clayton Greer

Clayton| |voiceover, photos of the girls flash| I searched all across the USA, and found twelve lucky girls to compete in a chance to become a top model.

The first girl in is a shy, quiet girl from New Orleans
Biancka Stanford, Seventeen, New Orleans, Louisiana
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Clayton| Hello, Biancka.
Biancka| Hi.. I am Biancka.
Clayton| Yessss, I know that. May I ask you, how tall are you?
Biancka| 6'0.
Clayton| It really shows in this picture. I love your height. Also, those eyes of yours are breathtaking.
Biancka| Thanks.....

The next girl in is an exotic, ice blond girl

Eromi Perera, Nineteen, New York City, New York
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Clayton| Hello Eromi!
Eromi| Hi.
Clayton| Why do you want to model?
Eromi| I want to model because it is a great way to make money, and it has been a great hobby for me ever since I was a little girl.
Clayton| Thank you Eromi.

A girl with platinum blond hair, and brown eyes walks in
Estelle Warren, Twenty-two, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Clayton| You are so stunning!
Estelle| Oh....really?
Clayton| Yes, yes you are.
Estelle| Thank you! No one has really ever told me that.
Clayton| They have not?
Estelle| Actually-I was teased for being the ugly girl in school. They said I was 'too weird' for the popular girls. It really hurt, because all I wanted was to fit in.
Clayton| Thank you, Estelle.

The next girl up is plus sized, blue eyed, tanned skinned
Fiona Gatewood, Twenty, Portland, Oregon
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Clayton| I love your eyes.
Fiona| Thank you so much!
Clayton| You are welcome. Why do you want to model?
Fiona| I want to model because I have always had a passion for being in front of a camera. I do not know why, but cameras have always fascinated me, and I know that with my weight, it is hard to make it in the industry. But with this competition, I can prove myself.
Clayton| Thank you, Fiona.

Next in is a quirky french girl
Franky Bonnet, Nineteen, Marseille, France
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Clayton| So you still reside in France?
Franky| Yes. I had to fly out to America to get here to the audition. It cost many franc to get down here, but I hope it is worth it.
Clayton| Interesting....., so why do you want to model?
Franky| Because modeling has been something disapproved for my family, and I want to change my parent's minds. They did not like me flying to America to get here.
Clayton| Okay, thanks Franky.

An African-American girl walks in
Ivy Taban, Twenty, Miami, Florida
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Clayton| You are fierce, girl!
Ivy| I know right? I am the b$%ch!
Clayton| :lol, Why do you want to be a model?
Ivy| Because I think that I have a stunning face, great for beauty ads, anything. I also have a great body, and I can work for fashion shows!
Clayton| Thanks, Ivy.

Next in is an awkward, wide eyed girl
Jade Perry, Nineteen, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Clayton| OMG your eyes!
Jade| Haaa, a lot of people tell me that I have odd eyes.
Clayton| They are not odd, they are beautiful!
Jade| Thank you!
Clayton| It says here that you had a struggle in life, can you explain that to me?
Jade| My anorexia. I struggled with it for a long time.
Clayton| Thank you, Jade.

The next girl up is blond haired, blue eyed.
Jasmine Fisher, Twenty-three, Reno, Nevada
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Clayton| Hello!
Jasmine| Hi! I am so excited to meet you!
Clayton| Aw, thanks. So, why do you want to become a top model?
Jasmine| My mom was a model in her younger years. She got the cover of Las Vegas weekly, and that inspired me.
Clayton| Thanks, Jasmine.

The next girl in is an African-American girl
Markeeta West, Twenty-one, Harlem, New York
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Clayton| Hello, Markeeta.
Markeeta| Hi!
Clayton| Well, tell me about yourself.
Markeeta| I am currently going to school to become a nurse, because I love taking care of people. But, I also feel that I should be a model. I tried out for this competition because I felt like I needed to take a break from school's craziness, and try live one of my biggest dreams.

A bald, African-American girl walks in
Mya Coleman, Eighteen, Chicago, Illinois
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Clayton| :surrender You are too stunning!
Mya| Aw, thank you.
Clayton| I love your skin tone.
Mya| Thank you! I want to be a model so bad. My original country does not approve of modeling, and I want to prove to them that I can be a supermodel.
Clayton| Thank you, Mya!

A set of plus sized twins walk in dressed in the same outfit
Padra and Paula Gallini, Nineteen, Baltimore, Maryland
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Clayton| Well look at you two. Dressed the same.
Padra| It is something that we do. We always go everywhere with each other, wear the same clothes, everything.
Paula| Yeah! We totally do that, right Padraaaaaaa? [/annoying twin]
Clayton| Riiiight. Thank you two!

Schalein
06-18-2010, 10:42 PM
omg, I love everyone! This is such a diverse cast~ My favourite is Jade.

Luisdcv
06-18-2010, 10:50 PM
I adore Estelle,Fiona and Mya :love

this is really such a diverse cast, I loveeee it :smitten

wccats
06-18-2010, 10:52 PM
LOVE THEM ALL TBH :surrender

Clayton
06-18-2010, 11:16 PM
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Clayton| Hello, ladies. This is your first elimination. In ten seconds, this curtain will drop, and the final ten will be revealed.

TEN.

NINE.

EIGHT.

SEVEN.

SIX.

FIVE.

FOUR.

THREE.

TWO.

ONE.





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Paula| I am very sad to be eliminated right now. I just hope that things will work out for me in the future.

Fiona| Ugh, I hate that I am eliminated. Oh well, I know that things will work out for me. You will see me on the cover of magazines, and in runway shows. Just wait!

nab
06-19-2010, 12:15 AM
Eromi, Estelle, IVY :smitten , MARKEETA :love , Padra, and PAULA :smize

OH @ Paula getting eliminated :cry

She is SOOOOOOOOOOOO much better than Padra

RnRModel1
06-19-2010, 12:20 AM
Estelle looks like Rae from C13 :smitten. And she's from NC! She has to win. :love

alesch1919
06-19-2010, 01:24 AM
Love all of them! ESTELLE/JASMINE and MARKEETA WORKS!

ashantimania
06-19-2010, 07:23 AM
OMG this fanfic looks SO amazing Clayton :smitten
Biancka, Estelle, Ivy, Jasmine, Mya :cheer

cinmantha
06-19-2010, 08:09 AM
Love everyone! :love I preferred Paula over Padra though, but the cast is amazing.
Franky and Jasmine are my favorites.

wts
06-19-2010, 09:37 AM
OMG @ this :love

I love Estelle, Ivy, Jasmine, and Mya.

Distorted Asylum
06-19-2010, 09:56 AM
This is awesome. Love the cast :woo

Shelton123
06-19-2010, 10:26 AM
Mya/Ivy/Eromi FTW :love

Tyler Neal
06-19-2010, 10:30 AM
Ivy is gorgeous. :smitten

Clayton
06-19-2010, 11:32 PM
I have a problem; I can not think of any photoshoots. Any suggestions? (:

Shattered
06-19-2010, 11:37 PM
I think it would be awesome if you based photoshoots off of fashion mag editorials irl.
Like particular editorials you love, translating them into shoots. :love

MilaJ
06-22-2010, 06:58 PM
CONTINUE THIS GAME

Clayton
06-23-2010, 02:25 AM
It is being continued, bb. I am taking my time with it instead of rushing.

Clayton
06-29-2010, 12:06 PM
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|all of the girls arrive at their model mansion|

Mya| This place is amazing!

Biancka| I know, right?

Eromi| This is just like a dream right now. I can not believe it.

|Franky and Jasmine are talking|

Franky| So, how are you? I am Franky.

Jasmine| I am fine. My name is Jasmine, btw.

Franky| Nice to meet you.

|Meanwhile, Jade is sitting on the sofa, drawing. Padra walks up to her|

Padra| Hi. I am Padra. What are you drawing?

Jade| A skull. Drawing helps me reflect my inner thoughts. My favorite drawing of mine was my ghost Egyptian dance.

Padra| And that drawing was reflected from.........your thoughts?

Jade| Yes.

Padra| Oookay....

Estelle| |CONFESSIONAL| I was always the ugly girl in school. I was teased constantly because of my 'odd' face. But I entered this competition to show them that I am beautiful.

Luisdcv
06-29-2010, 03:43 PM
wow estelle is so gorgeous , :shame the people who called her ugly

Tachiikawa.
06-30-2010, 05:03 PM
Oh. Love the cast, another amazing fan fic :love.

Go Biancka. Estelle. Jasmine. Markeeta. Pandra. Mya :smitten

Clayton
07-09-2010, 12:08 AM
This is being continued, guys! Please comment. <3

Distorted Asylum
07-09-2010, 12:41 AM
:woo so glad this is continuing! When's the next epi?

Clayton
07-09-2010, 12:48 AM
Most likely tomorrow. I am happy to continue it, also.

Clayton
07-19-2010, 07:21 AM
Bump. This is being continued! :woo

Typing judging tbh.

Clayton
07-19-2010, 07:59 AM
JUDGING ONE

Clayton| Welcome to your first judging, ladies. This week you had ads for Estee Lauder's new perfume, Sensous. Lets see the best photos! Biancka is first.

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This is stunning, Biancka, but it does not evoke a perfume ad. The pose is a little too casual. Eromi is next.

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Eromi, you look a littleeeee sleepy here. I do not think that you tried your hardest. You had a little spat with the photographer, and that is something that you do not do in the modeling world. Estelle is up next.

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Estelle! This is the most gorgeous thing! It really shows a perfume ad look, and you have a gorgeous face that any model would die for. Franky is next.

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Franky, this photo has this elegance and poise to it, and your face looks really beautiful here. Ivy is up next.

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This is lovely, but you look a little short here. You lost your neck, and the more neck the better. Jade is next.

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Jade, this is stunning. You have these breathtaking eyes, and they light up the photo. Jasmine is up next.

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Jasmine, this does not really look like a perfume ad. I mean, it is beautiful, but the pose is a little extreme for a perfume ad. Markeeta is next up.

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This is lovely, Markeeta. The sitting pose is great, and you look graceful and elegant here. Nice job. Mya is next.

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The pose is fierce! You have this skintone that is beautiful, and I love this photo. Padra is last but not least.

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Padra, this is nice, but it does not seem like an ad that I would see. You need to spice up your posing, or you will fall flat.

Clayton| When I call you back one of you will be eliminated.

Clayton
07-19-2010, 08:01 AM
ELIMINATION ONE

Clayton| Ten stunning girls stand before me but I only have nine photos in my hands. The girl with the best photo will receive their photo as digital art in the house. The first name that I am going to call is
....


ESTELLE

JADE

MARKEETA

MYA

FRANKY

JASMINE

IVY

BIANCKA

Will Eromi and Padra please step forward?

Eromi, you are a beautiful girl, but your photo was not fit for a perfume ad.

Padra, like I said, your posing needed to improve. You are a beautiful girl, and I want to see you succeed in this industry.

So who gets a second chance?


EROMI

Padra, I know that you can succeed in this industry. Maybe just not with this competition.

Padra| Of course I am upset to be eliminated, but y'know, it is fine. I know that I can make it in this industry.


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gravity_eyes
07-19-2010, 09:10 AM
Gorgeous girls :love Estelle is love.

Luisdcv
07-19-2010, 09:22 AM
aww I liked her :cry

Biancka did the best to me, this girls are so amazing Clayton :love

RockerTannz
07-19-2010, 01:12 PM
I like everyone :smitten
Jasmine and Eromi are my favorites.

Clayton
07-25-2010, 02:59 AM
Next episode soon!